BA2a - Mid-Unit Review Presentation/Feedback

Nov 11, 2015
2 min read

Today I presented my Pitch Document in front of the tutors for our 'Mid-Unit Review', which is part of the course structure to determine what stage we're at in the project.

These were the slides I presented, which includes feedback:

Title: > Feedback: No comments, good layout and clean.

Overview: > Feedback: Clean, much better than before. Liked how the screenshot of the game was the main focus. Text is easily readable and well presented. The tutors liked how the overall design was structured to look very 'app-game like', with bold text and being easy to follow.

Gameplay: > Feedback:

Overall good layout and images are easy to understand. However, needs to show how the player will activate certain things. For example, showing that they will need to touch and hold their finger while moving it on the screen to aim.

Gameplay 2 > Feedback: Images are easy to understand, possibly less text?

Captains

> Feedback:

Good layout, possibly more captain artwork if time allows? However, they liked that the sillhouettes could indicate that those captains are not selected. Not feedback from the tutors, but I noticed a typing error where I should've wrote 'ability', instead of accidently writing 'abilitiy'.

Level Select

> Feedback:

Very easy to understand. I suggested to the tutors that I should turn some of the crystals grey to show that the particular level had not been unlocked yet, where they said that creating a padlock on top of them would be a good idea.

Levels: > Feedback: Visually very good. There could be more unique traits to each one such as a different weather condition, for example tornadoes, snow, rain e.t.c.

Progression:

> Feedback: I should condense '(After Completing Level 10(25) )' to simply '(Level 10/25)'. I should change 'New Visual/Skin' to just 'New Costume', as this could be considered gamer jargon.

Music:

> Feedback: Good music choices, fitting towards the theme. I didn't show the sound effects (which would be the sound of canons e.t.c with the in level music) because I am still working on it, this will be completed before the deadline however.