BA2a - Changes to my Pitch Document

Nov 11, 2015
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Title Page: > No Changes

Overview: > Changes: I added an additional sign on the left side which states 'Touch, drag and Select'. During the mid-unit presentation I was told that it wasn't so obvious how the player would be able to use the controls, so instead of trying to squeeze in more text and information on my additional 'Gameplay' slides, I decided to place it here at the beggining instead.

Gameplay 1 > No Changes

Gameplay 2 > Changes: Although I was advised to remove more text, this is the one slide I decided against doing so. I feel like the diagrams weren't well enough explained by themselves and if I was to send this page to a potential publisher, they would most likely be confused with exactly what is happening without me presenting/explaining it. I haven't added a lot more text, just enough to clarify the diagrams more clearly. I have also added a purple glow where the health bar is, to indicate the shield canon is being used to heal the player (after an enemy ship has attacked).

Captains

> Changes: Fixed spelling mistake

Level Select

> Changes:

Added a padlock on some of the level numbers to show that they are currently locked, and that you can unlock them by completing the previous one.

Levels: > Changes: As suggested by the tutors, I have added various weather conditions and interesting astrological features to the backgrounds, including snow, sunlight, rain, storms, constellations and shooting stars.

Progression:

> Changes:

Like the tutors suggested I condensed the sub-headings to just 'Level 10' and 'Level 25', and changed the gamer jargon 'New Visual/skin' to simply 'New Costume'. However, I also added 'Requires Gems' to the Captains side as I realised the page doesn't really specify how to apply the upgrades. Lastly, I changed the title 'Captains', to 'Captain Upgrades', just to clarify what kind of progression the captains would have.